: Re: How to refer to a group having 3 men and 1 woman I am rewriting a story that once had a group of 4 men. Throughout the story they were often referred to as the 4 men. Now the story is

It seems a little odd to keep repeating the specific number of people in the group over and over. And there are a lot of synonyms for "group" (including the word "group" itself) that are not limited to a gender.

"The ___ ran over the bridge" could be filled with tons of words, such as:

group, party, characters, adventurers, explorers, warriors, people, etc.

Depending on your story, warriors might not be appropriate! but there are tons of variations of group names that would substitute for "The men ran over the bridge."

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