: Re: Is it bad to have sentences that are too long? The sentence in question is: As players move around the board, they buy, rent and sell properties from and to each other with each player

Sentences always are too long when they're wordy. Lauren did a nice job of tightening the sentence and makes an excellent point about zero sum. Depending on the context, the sentence might be tighten even further:

"As players move around the board, they buy, rent and sell properties from and to each other, trying to maximize their wealth."

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